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Mary, Mary is full of Wrath

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Sometime Wrath is the lesser Sin.

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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

well, the art is awesome, the level of detail composition and lighting works very good, we get a sense by the standing position of the girl what just happened, like she just kicked his ass after a brutal fight.
that being said, lets get to the improvement chances we got here
first and foremost in the titles, the fonts used are very generic and in my personal opinion are misplaced, almost the same size, i would suggest to revisit that part and use other fonts and give a sense of drama to that part too, you know like giving more protagonism to the emotions you want to create in your audience.
also i would suggest to pop out the light source a little more.
thats it for me, hope you guys find this words helpful.